The feedback I received in elevator pitch 2 was mainly that I could put more energy, or make it a little more entertaining. Because of this I tried to get into it, and I added a jingle for my product at the end :)
note: this is a different concept than last time
Beau,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really interesting idea. Parents always complain about having to spend money on shoes and clothes when their children begin to grow. I like this concept a lot and you presented it well. However, I would have liked to know how much my initial investment would be with some rough figures.
Beau,
ReplyDeleteYou definitely sold your idea through the way you intrigued your listener. I think you could expand who you were appealing to though and not just focus on parents. You did a really good job of conveying the opportunity and idea, but I think the listener wants to know what the shoes would look like and how they would expand. If you added those details I think you could really sell a successful product .
Beau,
ReplyDeleteLike I have said before, I love the idea! I commented on your last pitch and I did notice your energy not being prime, but you did very well in this video! I think this type of style is perfect for investors in the future! I do agree with the others, figures are nice. However, I know that sometimes this is tough to come up with as a student. Overall, good job!
Can i just say that I loved the jingle at the end! I think you're idea has the potential for great tractoin, but I would have liked to see more detail of what the shoes would look like, cost, or where you would sell them. You are very well spoken and spoke at a good pace.
ReplyDeleteThis idea alone is great, but added with your catchy personality in the pitch, it all comes together. Your positivity and enthusiasm made my day!
ReplyDeleteI love the song at the end. As a parent, I know my kiddo is attracted to cool, and cool will sell your shoes!